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Friday, September 22, 2017

Candy Clouds

In writing we watched a short clip about candy cloud so I made a story about it Please Leave a comment See You in the comment sexing hope you like my writing. 




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  1. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2017 at 9:48 AM

    Hey Sharney I like the writing you have done but i think you need to read the 14th line again because I found a mistake you did. Other then that I like the rest of it next time rember to re-read it and fix the mistakes.

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    1. AnonymousOctober 2, 2017 at 9:17 AM

      Thanks Shania ;)
      But you don't understand what I writ and what I'm writing about but thanks for realizing that.I'm definitely gonna use the read write ap. But the teacher said that it was great anyway thanks :)

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