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My Worst day ever!
It was a beautiful sunny day, in African Savannah it was a early November, we were walking across the river bank because it is a migration. I am glad that I am allowed to stay behind my dad because he is the lead bull, so when I get lost my dad will find me with all the the other bulls and will save me so it's like a safety blanket. I went to my mum and my dad .
I was still walking across the river bank with my dad at African Savannah when my dad saw the lions. When I looked my mum and dad left me so I was all alone. I had to run because the lions were chasing me until the lion leaped and made me roll down the hill. Then I fell in the water. I got the salty water in my mouth it tasted YUCK! Then came the crocodile SNAP! He tried to EAT me but then played tug of war with the lions, I was getting dragged. The lions won the tug of war then they dragged me up the hill to get away from the crocodile
Then I could hear my dad stomping with the other buffalos coming.
When he came my dad saved me so I went to my mum and my dad. They chased the lions away until the lions were gone.
I am so happy that my family saved me. Otherwise I would've been dead or badly hurt .
So we carried on to the place we were going .
By Sharney
