Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

On Friday, 10th of March, Ako Ngatahi and some other classes went to Spencer park .I went in a car with Hope, Blessing, Annaliese , Janel and Addyson with Tash in her car. I was excited to go. I was wondering what I would do there and me and Hope were sitting with each other on the way.

Once we got there we got into our groups, my number was 4. First we went to the playground for 15 minutes I was playing with one of my friends we played on this thing where you climb up  and walk across It wasn't scary once I went to the end I jumped off and went to flying fox.

Next we went to the beach to find treasures for our art we are making sculptures and we got to play in the wet sand to play. I didn't though, because how will we clean our feet? I found a big shell when we were looking for some treasures for our art. I was walking with Miss Scott. I found a lot of shells. I found the perfect piece of driftwood so I went to one of the parents to write my name on It .

After that we walked back to the playground then we realised the time so we didn't have enough time to play. So we went on the long was we got told the big white webs that looked like a spiders  house was a spider protecting its children and the birds they  had long legs because the swamp where they lived makes you sink. We went up on this thing where you go up some stairs and you see a nice view  the the swampy thing.  

When we got back to the playground it was time for lunch. I ate my chips and my sandwiches then we got to play on the playground for 25 minutes I was playing with my friend Dominique after that we went to line up at the gate where the bus was but I went with Tash to her car to go back to school. When we got out of the car we needed to walk to the class and wait for the people on the bus I told Hope my favourite thing that I did was go to the beach and I learnt that spiders protect their babies by making a house out of webs.