W.A.L.T
I know I will be successful when …
- Re-call what is happening in the video.
- Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
- Use paragraphs correctly.
- Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.
I was sitting at my ancient piano and started playing the sad depressing song for the old memories from when I was younger. It was my father's song from when he was in the old peoples home. I lived with my mum at the time she was only 35, young as a butterfly.
I was telling my grandson what happened. I call it the old times because it was ages ago.
Every note that I did bring back old memories from the saddest depressed song ever. My fingers were flowing as I followed my heart from what my father played.
The first memory was his grandmother she passed away because of old age All of a sudden she was next to me she gave me a kiss then faded away. I had a smile on my dial it was a weird feeling.
The Music was getting more depressing so I told my son about war I was a helper helping one and others when they got shot it was a sad time. I gave my son his present it was a toy horse and he said he wanted to be in the army, I don't think there will be another war and then once he went around my ancient piano then put it down next minute he played the last note with me.
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