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Monday, November 6, 2017

Feedback about Among The Hidden

Hey Bloggers,
In reading I have been reading novels im reading Among The Hidden by Margret Peterson  and its about a rule where you are only allowed 2 children and Luke is a shadow child. A shadow child is a 3 child and he always needs to hide from the government. Here is a slide about Luke and I haven't done a photo of him yet but I'm up to doing that so here is a slide of Luke. Do you know the different between forward is than feedback well feedback if where you get things on what you can do and feed forward is what you can do next. If you don't know what character traits is it is a slideshow about the character and I've been adding things that I have been learning about the characters in the story. I hope I teach you something bye.





Please give me some feedback so I know what to do next time and so I can improve my work  and I hope you like my slide about Luke.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sharney I like your character traits you done a really good job you done very well about Luke, but you have a few mistakes, you need to put your photo and you need to put details about their life and relationships and put little bit more information next time. That was amazing.

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