In CIP we have been starting to make a animation about kindness so here's my one. I did it about a girl being sad and a boy cheers her up soo here it is . I haven't finished it yet but I'll finish it when I have more time.
Hi Sharney, I really liked how you have set out the blog and explained what your been doing at the momment in CIP, maybe next time you could explain what CIP means and is and make the picture more clear for us to see and put down more information for us to know what it's about. Other than that it's a great blog post. -Brianna
Hi Sharney, I really need to start blogging on your blog more often. The thing that I really enjoyed was your drawing. i never knew that you were such a good drawer. The thing that you need to work on is making your blog post bigger and add in some more detail. What will be the ending of your story?
Hi Sharney, I like how you added a photo of your work. Maybe next time you could reread and make sure you spelt some things right. Did you enjoy doing this in CIP? I also like how you wrote what your drawing is about.
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Hi Sharney,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you have set out the blog and explained what your been doing at the momment in CIP, maybe next time you could explain what CIP means and is and make the picture more clear for us to see and put down more information for us to know what it's about. Other than that it's a great blog post.
-Brianna
Hi Sharney, I really need to start blogging on your blog more often. The thing that I really enjoyed was your drawing. i never knew that you were such a good drawer. The thing that you need to work on is making your blog post bigger and add in some more detail.
ReplyDeleteWhat will be the ending of your story?
Hi Sharney,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a photo of your work. Maybe next time you could reread and make sure you spelt some things right. Did you enjoy doing this in CIP? I also like how you wrote what your drawing is about.
Bye